Help!

[moonlettuce]

Does anyone fancy having a quick look over a short SGA fic for me? It's only 615 words, and it's for the sga_flashfic challenge, but I'm not sure if it works or not.

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[temaris.livejournal.com]

*poke*

[moonlettuce.livejournal.com]

*grin* Was going to send it to you, but didn't know if you'd be writing Ghosts :-D

Will send now.

::glomps::

[temaris.livejournal.com]

hit a sticky patch. Haven't touched it in over a week.

Don't want to write the big confrontation scene.

*pouts*

*sends beta back*

[temaris.livejournal.com]

And er, *yes* it works. Just needs some edges to be honed for full agony *g*

[moonlettuce.livejournal.com]

::hugs you::

::offers M7 support::

[temaris.livejournal.com]

I think I'm going to need to set myself a deadline or I will just ... procrastinate forever.

[temaris.livejournal.com]

How's *your* story doing?