Mar. 7th, 2006
Best bit of beta feedback. Ever.
Mar. 7th, 2006 06:52 pmFrom
temaris to me:
dude, if you're taking up random capitalisation we're going to have Words.
*grin* When she's right, she's right.
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dude, if you're taking up random capitalisation we're going to have Words.
*grin* When she's right, she's right.
Best bit of beta feedback. Ever.
Mar. 7th, 2006 06:52 pmFrom
temaris to me:
dude, if you're taking up random capitalisation we're going to have Words.
*grin* When she's right, she's right.
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
dude, if you're taking up random capitalisation we're going to have Words.
*grin* When she's right, she's right.
So, there's a McShep zine due out soon - 'Military/Intelligence' - and, being the cheap-skated whore that I am I tend to write for zines I want in the hopes that the story will be accepted and don't have to pay for the zine.
So, I wrote McShep. And
adannu and
temaris beta'ed. I got both the beta'ed versions back today. And, apart from both pointing out the same bits that need changing *grin*, Tem pointed out that the story isn't finished.
*sigh*
The problem is, she's right.
So, Claire learnsthreetwo things today.
1. I'm apparently writing a longer story than I first thought.
2. It looks like I'm buying the M/I zine.
3. I really do get purple when there's no one there to stop me.
ETA: I also learned I use the word 'So' a lot when starting sentences...
So, I wrote McShep. And
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
*sigh*
The problem is, she's right.
So, Claire learns
1. I'm apparently writing a longer story than I first thought.
2. It looks like I'm buying the M/I zine.
ETA: I also learned I use the word 'So' a lot when starting sentences...
So, there's a McShep zine due out soon - 'Military/Intelligence' - and, being the cheap-skated whore that I am I tend to write for zines I want in the hopes that the story will be accepted and don't have to pay for the zine.
So, I wrote McShep. And
adannu and
temaris beta'ed. I got both the beta'ed versions back today. And, apart from both pointing out the same bits that need changing *grin*, Tem pointed out that the story isn't finished.
*sigh*
The problem is, she's right.
So, Claire learnsthreetwo things today.
1. I'm apparently writing a longer story than I first thought.
2. It looks like I'm buying the M/I zine.
3. I really do get purple when there's no one there to stop me.
ETA: I also learned I use the word 'So' a lot when starting sentences...
So, I wrote McShep. And
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
*sigh*
The problem is, she's right.
So, Claire learns
1. I'm apparently writing a longer story than I first thought.
2. It looks like I'm buying the M/I zine.
ETA: I also learned I use the word 'So' a lot when starting sentences...