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So, I texted some Sheppard/McKay/Lorne to a few people and then [livejournal.com profile] seiyaharris wanted more. So I wrote completely gratuitous Sheppard/McKay/Lorne double penetration fic. Er, yeah...

Ternion
by Claire

It's about McKay/Sheppard/Lorne with McKay on his knees, mouth full of Lorne's cock and Lorne's hands over Sheppard's, both of them guiding McKay's head. And Sheppard can tell when Lorne's about to come, can tell because Lorne's fingers tighten over his, so he pulls McKay away. But the growl of complaint dies in Lorne's throat because Sheppard's just looking at him, and Lorne doesn't know what he's thinking but it makes his dick twitch.

That's how Lorne finds himself on his back, McKay straddling him and Sheppard guiding Lorne's cock into McKay's ass. And, jesus, it's tight and hot and Sheppard's fingers are sliding up inside McKay alongside Lorne's cock and McKay's making these whimpering sounds and Lorne's pretty sure that if Sheppard doesn't do what he's going to do right the fuck now then it's going to be too late. But then Sheppard's fingers are gone and there's a moment, two, before Sheppard's dick nudges into McKay alongside Lorne's and McKay just wails, low and breathy. And Lorne admits he panics just a little when McKay whimpers "Don't," but Sheppard keeps going until he's fully in, his balls resting on Lorne's, cock pressed alongside his inside McKay.

And McKay's taking them both, his arms trembling as he holds himself over Lorne. His eyes are closed and he's not moving, not talking, until Sheppard leans forward and murmurs softly, "Rodney." And McKay keens, ass clenching around both of them, and Lorne's cock is pressed against his commanding officer's and if there's anything that wasn't in the information they gave him about Atlantis, then this is it. Different galaxy? Check. Space vampires? Check. Floating city? Check. Being balls deep inside the Chief Scientist while double fucking him with your CO? Definitely not check. And maybe it should be, because if this is what's on offer then every fucker would sign up in a heartbeat. Because McKay's tight and hot and every whimper is shooting straight into Lorne's cock.

Every whimper and every breath and every please, oh god, please just move because McKay's begging them now, body shaking and eyes open now although they're so blown Lorne can barely see the blue.

"You ready, Rodney?" And Sheppard's voice is sending a few messages of its own to Lorne's dick.

McKay just nods, nods and then sobs as Sheppard slides back, cock gliding slickly over Lorne's before pushing back in again. And it's the slap of Sheppard's balls against his that gets Lorne moving. That and the armful of naked scientist. And it takes them a couple of minutes, experimental moves of who should be sliding in and who should be sliding out, to get the rhythm going, but then they're there. Cock sliding against cock and McKay writhing between them, his own dick throbbing heavily where it's pressed between him and Lorne.

And it doesn't take long. Doesn't take long because Lorne was close anyway and the combination of McKay's body and Sheppard's cock is more than enough to push him over the edge. Lorne jerks, feels the come rushing out of him to coat both his cock and Sheppard's. And Sheppard's only a few seconds behind him, the two loads of come mixing inside McKay and over their cocks.

But only two of them have come, and McKay's still begging, still moving. Sheppard's arms wrap around him and pull him up, back to chest. McKay's chest is heaving and his cock red and hard, so Lorne reaches out, wraps his fingers around McKay's dick and squeezes. And Lorne hopes that these walls really are soundproofed because the scream that comes from McKay's throat when he comes, liquid shooting out over Lorne's hand, is enough to bring several squads of Marines running.

McKay slumps when he's done, Sheppard's arms around him the only things that keeping him from collapsing onto Lorne's chest. Sheppard shifts slightly, his cock slipping out of McKay's body and leaving Lorne feeling strangely alone until he reaches forward. Sheppard's gaze doesn't move from Lorne's face as he wraps his fingers around Lorne's wrist and brings his hand to his lips, lapping McKay's come off Lorne's fingers. And Lorne's dick gives a final twitch in McKay's body before it finally gives up the fight and slips out, eliciting a tiny whimper from McKay.

Then Sheppard's moving, hauling the still insensate McKay to his feet and over to the bed. And Lorne's pretty sure that's his cue to leave, to find his clothes and go, but Sheppard's looking at him and Lorne has the sudden feeling he's meant to give an answer without knowing what the question is. He takes a step towards the bed, watching the tension he hadn't even realised was there drain out of Sheppard's body.

And that's how Lorne finds himself in bed, McKay's arm over his chest and looking at Sheppard over the now sleeping scientist.

"Colonel?"

But Sheppard just smiles, places his leg over the tangle of Lorne and McKay's, and closes his eyes to sleep as the light in the room drops out in to darkness.

After a few moments Lorne does the same, and everything else can be figured out in the morning.
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Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Is that even anatomically possible? It sounds painful.

Date: 2007-07-29 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
Who needs PLOT when you have ass-fuckery? No, really!

WHEE! Ass-fuckery!

I think you should write more. *nods*

Especially about what Rodney says when he finally finds his tongue again.

*g*

Wherever it is when he finds it...

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
Most things are if you try hard enough - no pun intended.

*nods*

People in the know have spoken.

Dude, people put whole hands inside people. Or huge massive stonking dildos in. I tried to find a suitably huge picture but am too tired to right now.

Date: 2007-07-29 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shetiger.livejournal.com
Jesus guh.

I might have to reevaluate my OT3 for this fandom. *fans self*

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Yes. Yes, it is. (I can even supply video evidence...) *grin*

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leyenn.livejournal.com
*cackles* Why anyone would challenge you on such things is beyond me. ;)

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* Like I said, video evidence ;)

Date: 2007-07-29 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
I could make it the porn!verse. No plot, just lots of fucking, sucking, rimming, toys *evil grin*

Date: 2007-07-29 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* I am totally enamored with th entire Sheppard/McKay/Lorne threesome. I think because if it's three of the team, I alway feel for the one left out - which is where OT4 comes in! Wheeeeeee!

Date: 2007-07-29 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the4ts.livejournal.com
Holy ::insert your favourite explective here::

Jesus, but that was hot! I mean seriously, seriously hot. It may take me a while to recover.

I, too, used to have video evidence (a film by Falcon, IIRC, by a pool) but it is on my defunct laptop (and one of the reasons I have yet to get it mended as goodness knows what else is on there!).

Date: 2007-07-29 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shetiger.livejournal.com
I fell for John/Rodney/Teyla before Ronon entered the picture, but I do agree that OT4 works a bit better. It's just much harder to write. :D

But now I'm going to have to spend more time contemplating Lorne sandwiches. Mmmm.

Date: 2007-07-29 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com
OK, I'm new to this fandom, and I suspect I'm going to be ostricised for being a Shep/Lorne shipper rather than a McShep fan, but DEAR GOD *fans self*

Plot is vastly overrated :D

Date: 2007-07-30 03:13 am (UTC)
amalthia: (Default)
From: [personal profile] amalthia
this was really really hot!

Date: 2007-07-30 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seiyaharris.livejournal.com
Okay, somewhat horrifyingly, I think I have the video you're talking about! Was it multiple random dudes around a pool? And there was one really hairy guy? And it was an incomplete file? Dude.

Date: 2007-07-30 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clockstopper.livejournal.com
I... um... yeah... this... this was super hotness and my goodness oh so dirty yet awesome and someone wrote John/Rodney/Lorne and it was fantastic. That is all I have to say.

Date: 2007-07-30 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the4ts.livejournal.com
That's the one! I'm not too sure about the hairy guy but it's probable. Said laptop has been defunct for years, literally (maybe 3 or more). It wasn't the whole film but it was quite a long clip.

Ummmmm, not that I watched it or anything!!!!!

::coughs::

Date: 2007-07-30 10:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seiyaharris.livejournal.com
lol oh no, no I've never watched it either *coughs* And I certainly wasn't walking through Center MK a couple of years ago at Collectormania and said quite loudly to Sam & Charlie, re: the clip 'I was just like 'that's never gonna fit!' and then IT DID!'

Ahem.

Date: 2007-07-30 02:51 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-07-30 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the4ts.livejournal.com
LOL!! I bet that must have turned some heads :)

Date: 2007-07-30 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seiyaharris.livejournal.com
lol at the very least I got Charlie and Sam looking scandalised and laughing all quite raucously.

Date: 2007-07-30 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Lorne sandwiches are definitely a good thing to contemplate *grin*

Date: 2007-07-30 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
lol! That's the video I have as well! *grin*

*dances you around*

Date: 2007-07-30 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* Well, the thing I like about this fandom is that most of the people are all, 'Ship who you want, it just means more porn for everyone!'

Glad you liked :D And plot is completely overrated ;)

Date: 2007-07-30 08:38 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-07-30 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Yes! That is the one I have, as well :)
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