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So, I texted some Sheppard/McKay/Lorne to a few people and then [livejournal.com profile] seiyaharris wanted more. So I wrote completely gratuitous Sheppard/McKay/Lorne double penetration fic. Er, yeah...

Ternion
by Claire

It's about McKay/Sheppard/Lorne with McKay on his knees, mouth full of Lorne's cock and Lorne's hands over Sheppard's, both of them guiding McKay's head. And Sheppard can tell when Lorne's about to come, can tell because Lorne's fingers tighten over his, so he pulls McKay away. But the growl of complaint dies in Lorne's throat because Sheppard's just looking at him, and Lorne doesn't know what he's thinking but it makes his dick twitch.

That's how Lorne finds himself on his back, McKay straddling him and Sheppard guiding Lorne's cock into McKay's ass. And, jesus, it's tight and hot and Sheppard's fingers are sliding up inside McKay alongside Lorne's cock and McKay's making these whimpering sounds and Lorne's pretty sure that if Sheppard doesn't do what he's going to do right the fuck now then it's going to be too late. But then Sheppard's fingers are gone and there's a moment, two, before Sheppard's dick nudges into McKay alongside Lorne's and McKay just wails, low and breathy. And Lorne admits he panics just a little when McKay whimpers "Don't," but Sheppard keeps going until he's fully in, his balls resting on Lorne's, cock pressed alongside his inside McKay.

And McKay's taking them both, his arms trembling as he holds himself over Lorne. His eyes are closed and he's not moving, not talking, until Sheppard leans forward and murmurs softly, "Rodney." And McKay keens, ass clenching around both of them, and Lorne's cock is pressed against his commanding officer's and if there's anything that wasn't in the information they gave him about Atlantis, then this is it. Different galaxy? Check. Space vampires? Check. Floating city? Check. Being balls deep inside the Chief Scientist while double fucking him with your CO? Definitely not check. And maybe it should be, because if this is what's on offer then every fucker would sign up in a heartbeat. Because McKay's tight and hot and every whimper is shooting straight into Lorne's cock.

Every whimper and every breath and every please, oh god, please just move because McKay's begging them now, body shaking and eyes open now although they're so blown Lorne can barely see the blue.

"You ready, Rodney?" And Sheppard's voice is sending a few messages of its own to Lorne's dick.

McKay just nods, nods and then sobs as Sheppard slides back, cock gliding slickly over Lorne's before pushing back in again. And it's the slap of Sheppard's balls against his that gets Lorne moving. That and the armful of naked scientist. And it takes them a couple of minutes, experimental moves of who should be sliding in and who should be sliding out, to get the rhythm going, but then they're there. Cock sliding against cock and McKay writhing between them, his own dick throbbing heavily where it's pressed between him and Lorne.

And it doesn't take long. Doesn't take long because Lorne was close anyway and the combination of McKay's body and Sheppard's cock is more than enough to push him over the edge. Lorne jerks, feels the come rushing out of him to coat both his cock and Sheppard's. And Sheppard's only a few seconds behind him, the two loads of come mixing inside McKay and over their cocks.

But only two of them have come, and McKay's still begging, still moving. Sheppard's arms wrap around him and pull him up, back to chest. McKay's chest is heaving and his cock red and hard, so Lorne reaches out, wraps his fingers around McKay's dick and squeezes. And Lorne hopes that these walls really are soundproofed because the scream that comes from McKay's throat when he comes, liquid shooting out over Lorne's hand, is enough to bring several squads of Marines running.

McKay slumps when he's done, Sheppard's arms around him the only things that keeping him from collapsing onto Lorne's chest. Sheppard shifts slightly, his cock slipping out of McKay's body and leaving Lorne feeling strangely alone until he reaches forward. Sheppard's gaze doesn't move from Lorne's face as he wraps his fingers around Lorne's wrist and brings his hand to his lips, lapping McKay's come off Lorne's fingers. And Lorne's dick gives a final twitch in McKay's body before it finally gives up the fight and slips out, eliciting a tiny whimper from McKay.

Then Sheppard's moving, hauling the still insensate McKay to his feet and over to the bed. And Lorne's pretty sure that's his cue to leave, to find his clothes and go, but Sheppard's looking at him and Lorne has the sudden feeling he's meant to give an answer without knowing what the question is. He takes a step towards the bed, watching the tension he hadn't even realised was there drain out of Sheppard's body.

And that's how Lorne finds himself in bed, McKay's arm over his chest and looking at Sheppard over the now sleeping scientist.

"Colonel?"

But Sheppard just smiles, places his leg over the tangle of Lorne and McKay's, and closes his eyes to sleep as the light in the room drops out in to darkness.

After a few moments Lorne does the same, and everything else can be figured out in the morning.

Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Is that even anatomically possible? It sounds painful.

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
Most things are if you try hard enough - no pun intended.

*nods*

People in the know have spoken.

Dude, people put whole hands inside people. Or huge massive stonking dildos in. I tried to find a suitably huge picture but am too tired to right now.

Re: Anatomically Possible?

Date: 2007-07-29 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Yes. Yes, it is. (I can even supply video evidence...) *grin*

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Date: 2007-07-29 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
Who needs PLOT when you have ass-fuckery? No, really!

WHEE! Ass-fuckery!

I think you should write more. *nods*

Especially about what Rodney says when he finally finds his tongue again.

*g*

Wherever it is when he finds it...

Date: 2007-07-29 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
I could make it the porn!verse. No plot, just lots of fucking, sucking, rimming, toys *evil grin*

Date: 2007-07-29 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shetiger.livejournal.com
Jesus guh.

I might have to reevaluate my OT3 for this fandom. *fans self*

Date: 2007-07-29 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* I am totally enamored with th entire Sheppard/McKay/Lorne threesome. I think because if it's three of the team, I alway feel for the one left out - which is where OT4 comes in! Wheeeeeee!

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Date: 2007-07-29 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the4ts.livejournal.com
Holy ::insert your favourite explective here::

Jesus, but that was hot! I mean seriously, seriously hot. It may take me a while to recover.

I, too, used to have video evidence (a film by Falcon, IIRC, by a pool) but it is on my defunct laptop (and one of the reasons I have yet to get it mended as goodness knows what else is on there!).

Date: 2007-07-30 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seiyaharris.livejournal.com
Okay, somewhat horrifyingly, I think I have the video you're talking about! Was it multiple random dudes around a pool? And there was one really hairy guy? And it was an incomplete file? Dude.

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Date: 2007-07-29 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com
OK, I'm new to this fandom, and I suspect I'm going to be ostricised for being a Shep/Lorne shipper rather than a McShep fan, but DEAR GOD *fans self*

Plot is vastly overrated :D

Date: 2007-07-30 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* Well, the thing I like about this fandom is that most of the people are all, 'Ship who you want, it just means more porn for everyone!'

Glad you liked :D And plot is completely overrated ;)

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Date: 2007-07-30 03:13 am (UTC)
amalthia: (Default)
From: [personal profile] amalthia
this was really really hot!

Date: 2007-07-30 08:38 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-07-30 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clockstopper.livejournal.com
I... um... yeah... this... this was super hotness and my goodness oh so dirty yet awesome and someone wrote John/Rodney/Lorne and it was fantastic. That is all I have to say.

Date: 2007-08-02 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
I'm tempted to write more in this 'verse and just call it my dirtybadwrongporn!verse *grin*

Date: 2007-08-02 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you :D

Date: 2007-07-31 02:48 am (UTC)
ext_2047: (hot)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Mmmmmmmmmyum. My favorite part is Rodney's stillness and the noises he makes after Lorne and then Sheppard are in. Oh yes.

Date: 2007-08-02 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* Glad you liked. There's just something about this threesome that makes me want to lick them :D

Date: 2007-07-31 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Oh wow, so very hot.

Date: 2007-08-02 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* There's just something about this threesome that works so well :)

Date: 2007-07-31 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caelent.livejournal.com
Okay, yeah, you got Lorne into the McShep equation. *worships you forever*

Date: 2007-08-02 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* McShep is my otp, but Sheppard/McKay/Lorne is my ot3.

Date: 2007-07-31 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dodificus.livejournal.com
Stories like this just make me angry about the size of the beds they've given everyone in Atlantis. I want the three of them to snuggle up together after their crazy hot double penetration sex...but they have those freaky single beds!!! Ummm, yeah, I liked your story:) I just have weird rage about the bed size on the show;)

Date: 2007-08-02 04:40 am (UTC)
ext_19652: (stargate atlantis major lorne)
From: [identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com
I second the weird rage. I mean, Ancients were the size of modern humans, weren't they? Those beds couldn't fit two Asgard, much less two average humans.

Sorry for commandeering your comment, I just had to chime in.

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Date: 2007-08-01 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] infinimato.livejournal.com
this is so, so, so, so, SO very wrong. and so melting.

plot? who needs plot when you have 3 pretty boys in bed? Feh, plot.

mmmmmmmmm

Date: 2007-08-02 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Absolutely. There are days when plot is so very unnecessary *g*

Date: 2007-08-01 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slybrarian.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. That's just mind-breakingly hot. And the ending is sweet, too.

Date: 2007-08-02 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you. Even with the porn, I have to get the happy end in there :)

Date: 2007-08-02 04:41 am (UTC)
ext_19652: (stargate atlantis mcshep)
From: [identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com
This. Was. So. Hot.


Well done.

Date: 2007-08-02 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad you liked :D

Date: 2007-10-25 02:51 am (UTC)
anna_luna: (Atlantis)
From: [personal profile] anna_luna
I offered to make some fanart for people on my LJ and [livejournal.com profile] the4ts asked for some fanart for this wonderful fic... and I of course (who loved every second of it), couldn't resist, so:

John, Rodney... and Lorne

John, Rodney... and Lorne

Date: 2007-11-25 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
I've been really sucky in replying to comments recently, so it's been far too long for me say this, but this is gorgeous :D

I'm totally stoked that you liked the story enough to take [livejournal.com profile] the4ts prompt :D

Thank you for this :)

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Date: 2007-10-25 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com
mmmmm guh!! that is so fucking hot! *adds to memories* I love the double penetration. umm could you please post this to my comm [livejournal.com profile] bottom_rodney?

Date: 2007-11-25 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :)

Ooooooo...

Date: 2007-10-25 05:20 am (UTC)
ext_834: (Straight Boys Kissing Makes Me Hot)
From: [identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com
I think I spontaneously orgasmed.
*iz ded*
-----}-@

Re: Ooooooo...

Date: 2007-11-25 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
Glad you liked :)

Date: 2007-10-25 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyflowdi.livejournal.com
Holy *hell*. Hot as a hot thing! Love Rodney keening between them, and Lorne so shocked by it all that all he can do is hang on for the ride. Man.

Thanks for this!

Date: 2007-11-25 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* My pleasure :) Glad you enjoyed :D

Date: 2007-10-26 07:20 pm (UTC)
mf_luder_xf: (SGA J&R)
From: [personal profile] mf_luder_xf
Damn.

Aww, I love this OT3. :-)

Date: 2007-11-25 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
*grin* I'm tempted to write more in this 'verse - lots of Sheppard/McKay/Lorne porn :D

Date: 2008-12-31 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanarts-series.livejournal.com
I discovered this site this afternoon and i'm in love with your sexy threesome, it's just perfect, hope you write more one day (with zelenka for a moresome LOL)

Date: 2009-01-05 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
::g:: Thanks :D I probably will write more as this is my OT3 and I kind of love my porn!verse ;)

Date: 2009-01-05 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badwolf36.livejournal.com
Damn. That was incredibly hot. I have a thing for that position in fic and you pulled it off extremely well. Thank you so much for sharing the smoking hotness. :D

Date: 2009-01-05 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlettuce.livejournal.com
::grin:: Thank you! I kind of love my just-the-porn!verse, so yay!

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