Or am I being too picky?
Jan. 10th, 2012 12:48 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
moonlettuceDear nursery who sent an e-mail advert around our work today,
If you're advocating yourselves as a place of learning for young and impressionable minds, it might make more of a statement if your six rather short paragraphs didn't contain one spelling mistake, two grammar errors and one homophone.
If I had kids* and was inclined to pay £900 a month for your services, gotta say, that wouldn't have impressed me.
No love,
Me
* Although, I suppose I could always send the cat. Not quite sure how the finger-painting would turn out, mind...
If you're advocating yourselves as a place of learning for young and impressionable minds, it might make more of a statement if your six rather short paragraphs didn't contain one spelling mistake, two grammar errors and one homophone.
If I had kids* and was inclined to pay £900 a month for your services, gotta say, that wouldn't have impressed me.
No love,
Me
* Although, I suppose I could always send the cat. Not quite sure how the finger-painting would turn out, mind...
